Feedback - assembly sharing

Dear Tane,

The sharing of your writing was impressive at assembly today. Well done on such a great recount, your use of language is really interesting and you are becoming a great writer.

Keep up the great work.

Mr Clarke

Tanes Learning Portfolio

i have learned that Burnham school is a good school and its a enviro friendly and is well controlled.
i have learned how to make things out of clay, i have learned how to write instructions better.